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Onward! May 12, 2009

Posted by findingherforte in poetry, Uncategorized.
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I stopped reading
in between
the lines
What a joke to
look among
life’s hard pressed
When the scent of
burst through
the windows of
my open mind
the shutters
Coaxing shapely
and ambitious
A new generation
of ripples
taking shape
making waves
in otherwise concrete
Can’t dwell on
this emotion
in motion
too long before
it fades
like last night’s
star light
Can’t let my
dreams turn
white dwarf
before they get
to glimmer
like the twinkle
in your baby blues
A breeze reawakens
cotton ball fantasies
And the day
has scarcely been
embarked upon



1. Michael - May 12, 2009

it’s all over the place but somehow it flows really really well. excellent work!

2. Papa - May 13, 2009

Wicked pissa. Awsome. I like this one. I don’t agree with Michael. I think it has its own direction and it leads you there.

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